All right! I’ve gone through EVERY chapter of Magical Girl Policy and made every continuity, grammatical, punctuation, and spelling error people could find. The story should read better than ever before and we can get back to what we do best, writing more MGP!
Now, I don’t want to say that it’s done. I will do ONE MORE pass through if you guys find more errors (especially link errors) but I want to say it’s 95% finished. I want to thank those that found errors, especially Pizza the Chaotic and Dave who did the lion’s share of the work… and is it hilarious to anyone OTHER than myself that my list was Pizza the Chaotic and Dave? Talk about two names that do NOT look like they belong in the same sentence together! XD
Let’s get back to work,
Taralynn
Glad I could help! It’s fun getting the chance to put the nitpickiness honed from my time on the wiki to good use. I’m actually in the process of making a document listing every single error I can find for the eventual second round of chapter edits. I’ll post it somewhere once it’s ready.
“Pizza the Chaotic & Dave” sounds like a terrible buddy cop show, but I’d watch it. I actually picked my name specifically because it’s so silly: when I played Shin Megami Tensei IV, I named the protagonist “Pizza” for kicks, and this dark and edgy RPG instantly became ten times funnier. “Chaotic” is because I made Pizza a chaos-aligned character, but “Chaotic Pizza” gives off the image of a messily topped pizza instead of a person named Pizza, and if people shortened it to “Chaotic” it’d come off as weirdly edgy and not as funny.
Just for my own “Hobbyist” interest, I’ve been keeping a running edit with spelling & grammar corrections as well. If you need a (sort of) backup, you can bug me on my gmail (you won’t be bugging me BTW)
oh my word I just thought of something. The Grand Adventures of Pizza the Chaotic and Dave…LOL!!