Wow you guys! The comments for Chapter 29 of MGP have been wildly positive! Thanks so much! I also want to give a special thank you to those who have been spotting a few inconsistencies and continuity errors… errors that for some reason seem to involve Vivian moreso than any other character. Must be because she’s too awesome to be contained by mere continuity! Or because I sometimes forget stuff and since I’m a discovery writer I don’t have the best notes. Thus, comments like Deencolo’s that point out each chapter there is a discrepancy… SO helpful! I mean, I started writing the reboot version of this story back in 2012. it’s been 3 years since then and I’m bound to forget stuff in that time.
There are bound to be a few retcons here and there as well as ideas that were vague back then are coming into focus for me now. Next chapter there will be one of them for sure. Nothing big, but little things that will make sense going forward. But if you guys ever find what you think is maybe a conflict in the story, let me know. I write by the seat of my pants and sometimes that seat gets thin. 🙂
Big girl job time!
Taralynn