Chapter 32 posted- more to come

Okay everyone, took me longer than I’d like but I got the chapter commentary for Chapter 32 done! Even if you read the chapter already, maybe give the commentary a look and, if you so choose, feel free to repost based on that! In short, I love comments.

So, those of you who are patrons will notice the March vignette has yet to be posted. It’ll go up over the weekend. I’m having just some unexpected delays at work but nothing that should be too bad. But this is also where I make the announcement that this month there are TWO pictures coming! That’s right! TWO! Basically I got my tax refund and decided, since you all have been so patient with me that I’m going to reward you all! So, I’m at work at the moment and can’t post the direct image (I’ll take care of that when I get home) but here is the link to the first commission done by DracoDragite and is an image of Robynne’s first meeting with Dale.

Now, first thing I want to say about DracoDragite is he was insanely easy to work with and if you need a commission, I cannot recommend him enough. But beyond that I love a lot of things about this picture. First, The random lines he adds to the apartment do an odd job of really making the appartment feel worn down and really does feel like a boy’s dorm. DracoDragite was particularly proud of his work on the carpet and I can see why. Feels appropriately ragged. Second, I love the expression on Robynne’s and Dale’s faces. Robynne seems appropriately flustered by the sudden hunky musician’s appearance and Dale has just the right mixture of dumbstruck, hopeful, casual, and nervous in his face. Third, love the aura around Dale. I mean, in the story it doesn’t have color but is just the texture of mahogany. That’s sort of difficult to represent without color so I like the use of mahogany color. Last, Robynne’s hair… I just love how it whips about as she steps back. I didn’t even ask for that, but it was just something DracoDragite did and I think it looks great!

The next commission will be coming to us soon™. It will be done for us by the wonderful Carrinth who I have been a fan of for a long time! Can’t wait to show off her work as she’s someone I’ve been hoping to commission for months!

May the chapter and pictures entertain you,
Taralynn

PS: A few of you have either increased or updated your pledges and for that I’m grateful! I’ve just been busy and been spacing it on sending more formal thank yous via Patreon. You guys are the wind beneath my wings!

1 thought on “Chapter 32 posted- more to come”

  1. I love you everytime i see the next chapter is ready and i hate you every time i finish to read it

    Awesome history
    Love
    Noir

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