So, guys, I didn’t get 37 completed. I sort of got hung on one part that sort of expanded beyond what I planned and it slowed me down. However, in the past I would have just delayed posting, but I kind of want to experiment with posting what I have so far and see how that feels. So if you want to comment on what you’ve see so far, please comment here in this post and copy over your whole thoughts when I complete this. Again, it’s just an experiment but we’ll see how it works out.
In the mean time, I plan to have the rest finished a week from now. So that’s, what, June 30th? Yeah. June 30th. That is when you shall have the rest of the chapter.
Until then, I hope what you get so far amuses you.
One more week to complete,
Taralynn
Honestly, I think it’s nice. A partial chapter to tied us over until the full release is something I genuinely appreciate. Especially since it stops at a somewhat natural point and not something like the middle of a conversation.
My normal deluge of a commentary can wait until the full release, but a few highlights for me: I think doing a review of the rest of the social was a good way to address lingering questions without dedicating too much of the story too it. Noriko/Robynne interactions are always both fun and informative. Kunapipi was right, they’re naturally becoming comfortable friends. Oh, and the mysteries at the Standridge Stones are exciting! Is there one more weapon, for the Knight?! Is it Fretribution?! Also, the idea that Robynne can actually sense Fate… oh, the possibilities!
Last thing to say is that I’m looking forward to seeing Robynne and Angela interact 1-on-1 in a less emotionally charged way. I’m curious to see their evolving dynamic. Alrighty, I’ll be quiet now.~
Great i love the idea of posting what you have so far. as Zexand said tied us over until the full release. i love reading the new chapters as soon as they are posted and this lets me get my fix a little sooner 😀 .
btw new info has been added to the wiki and profile pics have been added for more of the main characters
I bet a time gear that the Shrine Maiden’s barauta is waiting on the stone with a hidden message from the five heroines of the past, and that it will only be recovered if all five girls open the stone at the same time. The barauta is the only thing that could cause such an effect on Rob.